Lost and found.

It occured to me that I must have lost my Jesus somewhere in my shoes.
I checked them both, left and right, but He was nowhere to be found.
My shoes were so worn and full of holes.
He could have fallen out anywhere along the way.
As I sat upon the ground he made,
I thought back to the begining of the long journey that i have embarked on.
I thought back, way back to a time where my shoes were brand new.
I constantly longed to be there again.
Today, I wake up and put my new shoes on.
Grateful, I thank the Lord who's given me a new pair of shoes.

Reviews

[Sunny]

I really like this! the way you said you lost your Jesus in your shoes. and how your grateful He's given you a new pair of shoes!

[Becca*Type2012]

I like the reference back to God at th end. Nice write.

[Tallulah]

This poem is amazing. With such a positive message. i love it. Its so simple yet it says sooo much. I love it.
It occured to me that I must have lost my Jesus somewhere in my shoes.
^My fave line.

[Roger Ferguson II]

i think this alot. its good.
maybe you should try and center it, i think that would improve it. but its fine how it is too =)