Your Word

Just a simple love poem.. ah, love..

All I need is your touch.

That soft graze shoots lightening 
and sends me high above the clouds
 

All I need is your kiss.

Sweet lips breathing life into me
And through me.. because of me. 

All I need is your word.

Forever is too much to promise
but I will do this with you again and again
as long as I have your word. 

 

 

Reviews

[Tommy]

Simply lovely is this piece; there is a sense of sweet lust to this and I like it!
"Forever is too much to promise
but I will do this with you again and again
as long as I have your word."
Nice expression of feeling and spontaneity !
Keep up the good work.
RLG,
Tommy

[Emily]

Very nice piece! The repetitive nature of love is like that. You play the game over and over again. You can go in circles as long as the word is there, you trust. Trust is the name of the game. I like the flow of the writing. You've captured very well the nature of this.

Once again, very nice work!