FRENZIED LOVE

I feel the love in my heart,
I feel your breath when your apart,

The heated soul is warmed up so high,
Your touch makes me fly eleventh sky,

The depth of your love which makes me sigh,
The mere absence of yours makes me cry,

I love it when you sit by my side,
I feel complete when you hold me tight,

Along the rain, under the blue skies,
We sing the song about you and i,

The way the raindrops touch my skin,
Your pleasant kiss is felt within,

Wish your monsoon love never ends,
Wish your cozy hug lasts till the end..

Reviews

[Jasmine Thurber]

I love it is so sweet and good ryming I love it so much.

[alegria]

thanku so much. glad u liked it.:-):-)

[Sheila Kline]

Sweet and innocent, yet expressed with so very much love and adoration!

[alegria]

thanku so much for d review:))

[alegria]

thanku for your reviews...:)))

[S A Grant]

That is avery sweet poem i love it :D

[alegria]

thanku m glad u liked it:))

[Nath]

What a sweet love poem!
I particulary like the last stanza and the monsoon metaphor.
May the rain never stop.

[alegria]

thanku for d review:)))

[Nath]

You're welcome!

[Dayran]

A testament to the way love perceives itself.

[alegria]

thanku for d review:)