Cold Blues

I am trapped and the night is cold,

The ground that i can't hold,

Time thats is slipping of my hands,

Blurd future calls and cries

 

Sleeping in the lap of sorrow,

I have no dreams to borrow,

Pain entering the stage of life,

Deep into the sacrifice,

 

feel the skin burn in sight,

Lift the head to guided light,

Stars guiding me to tomorrow,

The depth of life is ultimately shallow.

 

Reviews

[Saddam]

feel the skin burn in sight,
Lift the head to guided light,
Stars guiding me to tomorrow,
The depth of life is ultimately shallow.

A wow type poetry with deep prespect. A marvelous write dear. keep it up.

[alegria]

thank u for ur lovely review :)

[Dayran]

Its an analysis of help received ... where it only highlights the shallowness. We need to do more ourselves. Nice.

[alegria]

thank u for ur review :)

[Oyindamola Shoola]

splendid...good sense of imagery....good choice of words...I lovely.... sometimes I think that when I feel trapped, it is my self I have to push first and not the wall....

[alegria]

thank u for ur review :)