wanna live

I wanna live i wanna be free,

i wanna discover the inner me,

even if i fall i wish to take it all,

i crave to live the dream that lies deep down with in..:)

Reviews

[Dove]

This is short but i love the flow of the words, it was kind of fun for me to read

[Akshat♥]

its short but it's okay..
live your life as you want it to be:)

[Herl Rodrin]

This is amazing! Short but full of substance.. Great work! But it would be more awesome if you'll add more ingredients to the poem. Anyhoo, I like it!

[Clever Forever]

This is really good, even being so short. I like the rhyme scheme, although my only critique would be that the formatting is a little off. It doesn't "flow" so to speak. Well written other than that!