winter to spring..

Its been a year on from the winter to spring.

i am still thinking about you and I kno its insane.

you there in my heart as a small tattoo.

the room which is shut cause of all the pain.

why am I still lost in thoughts?

when i so very know to ma heart that its all in vain..

is it so easy to play the game?

is it so easy for you to live back gain?

why is'nt it so easy for me despite so many tears in rain?

Have you seen the tears I wept?

Have you ever imagined my pain?

Is it really so easy for you to move on?

Without a thought again?

Pain and sorrow are a part of love.

But I never knew the extent of pain,

I swear I feel it I feel it now can never do if again..

Reviews

[GridLok]

Congratulations Alegria, your use of English has improved considerably. Punctuation will assist in a clearer expression of images and content … if I may suggest, as an example:
… The year has moved on from winter to spring;
I still think about you and know it's insane.
You there in my heart as a small tattoo;
a room that is shut 'cause of all the pain.

Keep at it Alegria

[Dayran]

And spring onto summer, the seasons change. And so do we, most of the time.

[Dove]

Great!! Love it!! This piece has a real nice flow and I feel like all the words it together perfectly