Two choices

A Poem by Priya Tyagi

They lived,

before they died

They died,

before they died

They died,

and lived forever

They lived,

but, lived never

© 2015 Priya Tyagi

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Deepak Belbase

it's sounds like:

love lives before it died,
hate died before love died
hate and love lived forever
hate hates the love and love loves the hate

a well crafted piece of art... thanks to share with us

Posted 10 Years Ago

Emily

Lovely write!!
Keep on writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago

S.P.GORAI

nicely explained in a few words..........................................

Posted 10 Years Ago

jacob erin-cilberto

sometimes we have to die in order to live....not literally, but with the idea of taking chances...risks...

living a bit on the edge...otherwise if we kill our dreams too early, we kill ourselves...

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on November 20, 2015
Last Updated on November 20, 2015

Author

Priya Tyagi

gurgaon, India

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I write because it's the most definitive quality that I have. I have never considered anything other than writing as a true passion. I want to become a successful published writer like so many here an.. more..