'Break-Free..'

...

"Drag me from the skies..
Drench me from the valleys..

Wanna break free, My Lively Life..!!!"

...

21st Sept., 2012

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I love this. xx

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you joshua deathdealer..!!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Good work!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks imagination101..!!!

[KAREN]

Nice work!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you storiestotell..!!

[Dayran]

Cool!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Dayran..!!

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

short and sweet...good job

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Starrleena Magyck..!!

[stars are far]

that was so nice :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks stars are far..!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words. Made your point in so few words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Coyote Sir..!!!

[Nayank]

What a lovely & Straight expression ... Just drag me or drench me or just leave me break free ..... Or just leave me un-break
"Don't leave me in all this pain
Don't leave me out in the rain
Come back and bring back my smile
Come and take these tears away
I need your arms to hold me now
The nights are so unkind
Bring back those nights when I held you beside me

Un-break my heart

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Nayank Saab..!!! You are here too.. :-)