'Engrave a story..'

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"To engrave a story on the Dashboard of the Car was the easiest approach for the much wanted attention, Rex was looking from Rosy, he went four steps ahead by pasting a wooden-carved name sheet - 'Destiny's Heaven' adjacent to the speedometer, sprinkling silver glitters on the steering, a string over the gear-box & a bundle of love-dipped notes inside the tissue-paper box..!!

Even before Rosy could have a feel of the beautiful aroma, a truck overloaded with iron rods gushed into the car and tossed it off..  The car cascaded, took few somersaults and bumped into a valley nearby..

Thanks Goodness! Rosy survived..!! 

What if the materialistic stuff went off.. the true emotions stay back if they are truly true..!! Rex rushed to save Rosy from all possible disaster, The Almighty was kind enough..!!

Profound thoughts find their way through.. Words go silent when emotions speak..!!!"

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Author's Note

Momentary thoughts weaved in 10 minutes!!

Reviews

[roarke]

Great opening sentence. It's "passing" not "pasting". This paragraph beginning: "What if the materialistic stuff went off..." is a bit confusing, I think I know where you are going with it, but it's not as illustrated as the other paragraphs. Nice assemblage for 10 minutes.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks so much Roarke Sir! M trying my hands on stories these days.. Will keep things in mind..

[Saddam]

High emotional story. You say right...

Profound thoughts find their way through..
Words go silent when emotions speak..!!!"

When and what can eyes say words can not. Aap ka kissagoe kamal ka hai. Send me more stories. I'll interstly wait.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Mr. Ssadd..!!

[Dayran]

A person selling fruits in a barrel ... may finally realize they have sold it all ... and there is no more to sell. Still ... if the person could change the empty barrel into a drum ... they would have a new vocation. Nice.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Dayran.!!