'Pervade Me..'

'Reliving passion, maturity, understanding and sensitivity..!!'

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"As i breath and stand on the crossroad..

Leaves sway by, even the lightest load..

Whispering through the sieve of moonlight..

Intensity unravels the depth of height..

Deep intense rolling hills, often close doorways.. 

Sparkling Innocence scatter evenly on highways..

Gathering an extra pounce of power..

Dismantling an era of egoistic tower..

A bewildering bright beam reflecting landscape..

Do i need to unwrap for another escape..

Come back, My Pineapple Rainbow, let us stumble again..

Permit me, pervade me, gather me, transform me into rain..!!!"

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Reviews

[Randolf Ramos]

"As i breath and stand on the crossroad..
Leaves sway by, even the lightest load..
Whispering through the sieve of moonlight..
Intensity unravels the depth of height..
Deep intense rolling hills, often close doorways..
Sparkling Innocence scatter evenly on highways..
Gathering an extra pounce of power..
Dismantling an era of egoistic tower..
A bewildering bright beam reflecting landscape..
Do i need to unwrap for another escape..

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Great write!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Nothing Personal..!!!

[Nothing Personal]

Oh Wow. Mind blowing finish to an excellent poem. I love the lines "Come back, My Pineapple Rainbow, let us stumble again..
Permit me, pervade me, gather me, transform me into rain..!!!"

" so..............................o much. Just too good. And just out of curiosity, i have an question for you. Can the pineapple rainbow be a man who permits, pervades ( makes love) and hence transforms it into rain . I related it in this way.. and permit and pervade me left such an impact. Those words lined after each other is just arousing. You paint a great image in this one..Keep up the good work...

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Most Welcome Coyote..!!

You may also read me at http://priyankaabhilaashi.wordpress.com/

Regards,

Priyanka Jain

[Coyote Poetry]

"As i breath and stand on the crossroad..
Leaves sway by, even the lightest load.."
A amazing poem. So many strong statements. I love to read your poetry. I like the ending. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Charles..!!!

[Charles]

This poem is quite unlike the usual offerings on this site. That alone would make it refreshing, but the lines themselves and the imagery (I especially liked the line: whispering through the sieve of moonlight) are splendid. It make take a couple of readings to fully appreciate how much the poem meets the message in the epigram (reliving passion, maturity, understanding and sensitivity). Good work.