'A Tough Bay..'
A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi
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"You hold my heart on a rough day..
You chose my breath on a tough bay..
How could you stake your precious pearl..
I was simply, a torn-off bruised worthless ray..!!"
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© 2011 Priyankaabhilaashi
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Thank you Alicia™..!!!!!
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Such a short but wonderfully written poem.
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Thank you Ms. imagination101..!!
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Thank you Cynthia..!!
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Thank you Ms. storiestotell..!!
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A brilliant short poem with deep meaning, i loved it!
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Thank you Ms. Stefanie..!!
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Thank you Ms. Angelina Paige..!!
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Thank you Coyote Sir..!!
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I love the whole story behind this poem! You did a great job on short poems! another powerful write!
Wonderful!
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Added on February 26, 2011
Last Updated on February 26, 2011
Author
PriyankaabhilaashiJaipur, India
About
A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!!
A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City.
You may read me here also:
http://enri.. more..
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