Crashing Sea

The crashing sea

It speaks to me

Of wonders

Treasure to never be discovered

It is a sweet, sweet lead

To dreams 

The crashing sea

It speaks to me!

Feel it on my skin

A cool sensation

Yet grim

I welcome it in

To my heart it will swim

Crashing sea

Consume me!

Reviews

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Loved this! Great imagery, powerful flow crashing like waves. I'm a sucker for anything Ocean and or Sea related

[Asb]

very true description...
a nice read !

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You have captured the sea in its simplicity.. The Sea evokes many emotions, it can be very consuming indeed. Nice write!

[Sarah]

The sea is lovely. It is realy good it is a very imaganitive description of the sea

[Coyote Poetry]

I love the ocean. Can create a peace and safety from this world. I like your description in your poem. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote