Empty

A searing pain

You give me chills

A empty feel

So gentle

Unfulfilled

 

Feel me with your love

And hate

I beg of you

Let me take it all away

And then you shall know what it feels to be empty.

Reviews

[reflectingus]

I love the chilling effect being created. Loved it. :)

[AK]

Empty. I have nothing to say. That. Was. Epic.
You show how very few words can explain things so many. Great job, Patricia!

[Jordan's Back]

Another Chilling poem

[J Todd Underhill]

I think it must be horrid to be empty, I remember back to the days when I felt it and though it is decades ago I remember it like yesterday, it was the worst feeling I remember

[Sometimes Blood]

A poem to stay in the mind of a reader.