The Last Say

The Last Say

A Poem by Pete
"

When you knock, ask to see God – none of the servants. - Thoreau

"
beginning | In the Midst . . .

take a long drag
let the smoke loiter on your lips
strip naked
open a bottle
scratch a lottery ticket
thrust a stymieing needle of hope down into a deep blue vein
take careful aim
try your best to erase the pain
before you fall of the edge and go insane

follow a trail of crumbs
curse
pray
they all take the same amount of effort
have the same amount of sway

i'm always amazed at how, why, when
and which way

they each have their say



© 2020 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"He listens equally to the prayers of the believer and the unbeliever." - Thoreau

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Fun read - the way you wrote this. As for what you wrote, I like the drive in your words it fits the many types of situation one could find themselves in to do what you write. Wonderfully explained and expressed! Tyfs

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Pete

5 Years Ago

it is interesting to me how we each turn to different things for comfort in times of trouble. thank.. read more

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..