Forced March

Forced March

A Poem by Pete
"

Dwell as near as possible to the channel in which your life flows. -Thoreau

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a pig with wings
now and again
a mute that sings
a has been

i light the candle
its truth drips and falls
i smoke life's weed
its high evades me

i kneel to pray
i'm back again the next day
i question the night but it has no answer
nothing to say
try as it may
a black cat got its tongue

i'm climbing a ladder with a missing rung
breathing with one lung
picking flowers when winter has sprung
whispering words to a song of solitude
i say, "abra cadabra" but possess no magic
only hocus pocus

i'm old and think that i'm young

alone despite being among



© 2020 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"To be a philosopher is not merely to have subtle thoughts, nor even to found a school, but so to love wisdom as to live according to its dictates, a life of simplicity, independence, magnanimity and trust." - Thoreau

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This one has "marking time" written all over it. The speaker comes across as one of some years who has apparently hit a plateau and can't seem to rise to another level. A lot of unique images here, all pointing to a feeling of frustration but not having a clue as to how to deal with it. The last two lines stand nicely alone, highlighting the speaker's situation. Be cool; sometimes you just can't force things.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Years Ago

you are amazingly right on the mark. i didn't think anyone would get the gist of my ramblings. i'm.. read more



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This one has "marking time" written all over it. The speaker comes across as one of some years who has apparently hit a plateau and can't seem to rise to another level. A lot of unique images here, all pointing to a feeling of frustration but not having a clue as to how to deal with it. The last two lines stand nicely alone, highlighting the speaker's situation. Be cool; sometimes you just can't force things.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Years Ago

you are amazingly right on the mark. i didn't think anyone would get the gist of my ramblings. i'm.. read more

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..