I Think It's Over

I Think It's Over

A Poem by Pete
"

Much of our poetry has the very best manners, but no character. - Thoreau

"

sporting a bald combover
and last night's hangover
gas up the land rover
like red rover
sending me on over
with a heart-shaped box of russel stover
searching for my sweet, four-leaf clover
easy now
maintain full composure

i didn't make her take a cab to the airport
i drover
so she wouldn't be late for the layover
moreover
watch out for the spillover
do it again
all over
'cuz when you get right down to it

i'm just a pushover



© 2020 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"My life has been the poem I would have writ,
But I could not both live and utter it." - Thoreau

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ahahahaha ...well done ... a fun time with rhyme ... the story held me ... especially like "...I drover.." ... and your closing self deprecating line "i'm a pushover" ... i love this .. and what imaginings all the between the lines spark in me ... I want to read the book ;)
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Years Ago

if we can't laugh at ourselves then we're missing out on the best comedy ever written. happy new ye.. read more
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

ahahaha yes .. best comedy ever right!? iagree with your powerful attitude .. the very best will hap.. read more



Reviews

ahahahaha ...well done ... a fun time with rhyme ... the story held me ... especially like "...I drover.." ... and your closing self deprecating line "i'm a pushover" ... i love this .. and what imaginings all the between the lines spark in me ... I want to read the book ;)
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Years Ago

if we can't laugh at ourselves then we're missing out on the best comedy ever written. happy new ye.. read more
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

ahahaha yes .. best comedy ever right!? iagree with your powerful attitude .. the very best will hap.. read more

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..