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A Poem by Pete
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Live your life, do your work, then take your hat. - Thoreua

"

i get upset when things are taken from me
but the reality is that they were never really mine
they're leased without an option to buy
for a short time

at least that's what it said on the flashing, neon sign


© 2021 Pete


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Pete
"Wealth is the ability to fully experience life." - Thoreau

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For a year I've been trying to study Buddhism (among other theologies), which tries to teach us grasping humans to let go of the outcome. I've actually had a few successes lately, turning my ego-response to a loss into something else . . . often it's a great poem! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

i'm too much of a control freak. gee, i wonder where that comes from ... :)



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This is really true coz some people usually have entitlement issues,they think theu ate robbed of some things when it was not really theirs to begin with

Amaka💜

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

yes. thank you for sharing ... :)
For a year I've been trying to study Buddhism (among other theologies), which tries to teach us grasping humans to let go of the outcome. I've actually had a few successes lately, turning my ego-response to a loss into something else . . . often it's a great poem! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

i'm too much of a control freak. gee, i wonder where that comes from ... :)
We come into this world with nothing. We may accrue wealth, but we can't take it with us. Most things in life are easy come, easy go. That isn't always easy to accept.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

with me it's more like hard come hard go. live and learn - makes us appreciate the truly important .. read more
You have touched on something people have trouble accepting, to their own suffering: This whole thing is, and always has been, a rental.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

as a kid, i remember building sandcastles at the beach and watch the tide wash them away - good prac.. read more

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Added on January 23, 2021
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..