“Time is but the stream I go a-fishing in. I drink at it; but while I drink I see the sandy bottom and detect how shallow it is. Its thin current slides away, but eternity remains. I would drink deeper; fish in the sky, whose bottom is pebbly with stars.”
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Your poem speaks to me of those decades when I was immersed in a career with the punctuation marks being long weekends backpacking or bicycling or some other escape from the noise & crowds. A few times I took a couple months off to do an extended version of "escape" -- I thought everyone should unplug for longer in life, a few times, at least. But now that I've lived alone in the wilderness for a decade, I could have never imagined what it would be like to become fully unplugged to such an extent. Your poem reminds me I've lost that nagging pull of obligations. Most of my life, it was only a bright peek, but now it surrounds me (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
wow. awesome share. i long to return to the woods again preferring the visits of four-legged visit.. read morewow. awesome share. i long to return to the woods again preferring the visits of four-legged visitors.
“I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front only the essential facts of life, and see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I had not lived.” - thoreau
Your poem speaks to me of those decades when I was immersed in a career with the punctuation marks being long weekends backpacking or bicycling or some other escape from the noise & crowds. A few times I took a couple months off to do an extended version of "escape" -- I thought everyone should unplug for longer in life, a few times, at least. But now that I've lived alone in the wilderness for a decade, I could have never imagined what it would be like to become fully unplugged to such an extent. Your poem reminds me I've lost that nagging pull of obligations. Most of my life, it was only a bright peek, but now it surrounds me (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
wow. awesome share. i long to return to the woods again preferring the visits of four-legged visit.. read morewow. awesome share. i long to return to the woods again preferring the visits of four-legged visitors.
“I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front only the essential facts of life, and see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I had not lived.” - thoreau
I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..