"The universe is not trying to break you, my dear, it's trying to find a way to wake you up, so that you will see what is real, and worth fighting for. It takes time to heal, but it also takes courage." - Thoreau
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For your first verse alone, you deserve a billion stars. the whole poem deserves billions stars, but that first verse took my heartbeat way. the easy yet so knowing, wise, caring, aware language You write with is where the power of your pen lays, the reader doesn't have to sit and think, in a way or another they get it even if they don't understand the words. another outstanding piece dear Pete.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
wow. so kind. you're shared thoughts are very aware and encouraging. appreciated ... :)
For your first verse alone, you deserve a billion stars. the whole poem deserves billions stars, but that first verse took my heartbeat way. the easy yet so knowing, wise, caring, aware language You write with is where the power of your pen lays, the reader doesn't have to sit and think, in a way or another they get it even if they don't understand the words. another outstanding piece dear Pete.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
wow. so kind. you're shared thoughts are very aware and encouraging. appreciated ... :)
I think we get pushed in the direction we are suppose to go. If we ignore it we will get moved and shaken until we move in the direction which we are suppose to go
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
true that. better to go willingly than kicking and screaming - takes a lot less energy and struggli.. read moretrue that. better to go willingly than kicking and screaming - takes a lot less energy and struggling. i hate it when you're right (lol). thanks pb ... :)
I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..