Extremities

Extremities

A Poem by Pete
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We loiter in winter while it is already spring. - Thoreau

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The Secret Messages of Swaying Trees - WSJ
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high and low
i searched for the will to let go
the means to forgive
nowhere to be found

the other day in the park
a large tree branch lay on the ground
torn by yesterday's wind 

i looked at the branch
i looked at the tree
i looked within me

one of its limbs now gone
the tree did not lament
it still stood tall
reaching for the sky
growing
its lifeblood continued flowing
it did not hide in shame
i asked myself if i should i not do the same

wearing the scars of the good fight
holding a sword of right
despite the past and undeniable truth showing
i  pondered for a time
then turned and went on my way
smiling
knowing
glowing

going



© 2021 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"The universe is not trying to break you, my dear, it's trying to find a way to wake you up, so that you will see what is real, and worth fighting for. It takes time to heal, but it also takes courage." - Thoreau

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For your first verse alone, you deserve a billion stars. the whole poem deserves billions stars, but that first verse took my heartbeat way. the easy yet so knowing, wise, caring, aware language You write with is where the power of your pen lays, the reader doesn't have to sit and think, in a way or another they get it even if they don't understand the words. another outstanding piece dear Pete.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

wow. so kind. you're shared thoughts are very aware and encouraging. appreciated ... :)



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For your first verse alone, you deserve a billion stars. the whole poem deserves billions stars, but that first verse took my heartbeat way. the easy yet so knowing, wise, caring, aware language You write with is where the power of your pen lays, the reader doesn't have to sit and think, in a way or another they get it even if they don't understand the words. another outstanding piece dear Pete.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

wow. so kind. you're shared thoughts are very aware and encouraging. appreciated ... :)
I think we get pushed in the direction we are suppose to go. If we ignore it we will get moved and shaken until we move in the direction which we are suppose to go

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

true that. better to go willingly than kicking and screaming - takes a lot less energy and struggli.. read more
Poetic Beauty

4 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on April 12, 2021
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..