Prospects (Things Were Looking Up)

Prospects (Things Were Looking Up)

A Poem by Pete
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The light which puts out our eyes is darkness to us. Only that day dawns to which we are awake. There is more day to dawn. The sun is but a morning star. - Thoreau

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the night was black as coal
dirty, dusty dreams traveled up and down the shaft of his mind
the light on his helmet would never be enough
the canary was dying
but someone had to keep the home fire burning 

and the briquettes coming



© 2021 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"Do not seek so anxiously to be developed, to subject yourself to many influences to be played on; it is all dissipation. Humility like darkness reveals the heavenly lights." - Thoreau

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I often used to ponder on the plight of the miner working in terrible conditions on the coal face. He knew he would see daylight at the end of his shift all being well. If you are stuck in a dark tunnel with a pin pick of light at the end of it, you are going to need to be mighty patient. Depression takes time and effort to work through. Well penned Pete. Your pen is prolific at the current time :)

Chris.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

i could never be one - way too dismal and claustrophobic. i feel for those folks. what they deal w.. read more



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Sometimes we get so busy trying to become something that life passes us by in second of a lightning strike.

We need to learn to slow down and enjoy life. Pause for a moment and live in the moment

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

thanks pb. can't disagree with anything you've said. life is changing so quickly we fear being lef.. read more
I often used to ponder on the plight of the miner working in terrible conditions on the coal face. He knew he would see daylight at the end of his shift all being well. If you are stuck in a dark tunnel with a pin pick of light at the end of it, you are going to need to be mighty patient. Depression takes time and effort to work through. Well penned Pete. Your pen is prolific at the current time :)

Chris.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

i could never be one - way too dismal and claustrophobic. i feel for those folks. what they deal w.. read more

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..