Packing Heat

Packing Heat

A Poem by Pete
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A gun will give you the body, not the bird. - Thoreau

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stone cutter chiseling
swizzle sticks in hard drinks swizzling
high tension wires sizzling
is it getting hot in here or is it just me

arrant, dilated pupils staring behind tenebrous shades
this playing field isn't level
when a panoptic smile turns into a frowning bevel
when a sweet caress of cold steel does the talking
when lying lips turn from stalking to walking
get out of the way
heed what i say
no more time to play

it's payday



© 2022 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"We cannot but pity the boy who has never fired a gun; he is no more humane, while his education has been sadly neglected." - Thoreau

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great quotes as always Pete .. wonderful pic .. super fitted for your poem .. i like the double entendre and your imaging and emotive qualities chill me ... not certain whether to applaud, run away from or shoot your pro/antagonist ;) the gun issue continues in America and always there will be opposing views; the brightest star in the debate remains ... criminals will not obey the law ... therefore .. adding more laws, making it more difficult and expensive to legally purchase gun weaponry and ammunition will only effect law abiding citizens ... the Second Amendment is crystal clear says i ;)
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Years Ago

lol - you slay me e. click, lock & load. it was a much different world at the time of the second .. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

yes ... it takes just a mustard seed of Faith to make monumental changes .. i think these small mira.. read more



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great quotes as always Pete .. wonderful pic .. super fitted for your poem .. i like the double entendre and your imaging and emotive qualities chill me ... not certain whether to applaud, run away from or shoot your pro/antagonist ;) the gun issue continues in America and always there will be opposing views; the brightest star in the debate remains ... criminals will not obey the law ... therefore .. adding more laws, making it more difficult and expensive to legally purchase gun weaponry and ammunition will only effect law abiding citizens ... the Second Amendment is crystal clear says i ;)
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Years Ago

lol - you slay me e. click, lock & load. it was a much different world at the time of the second .. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

yes ... it takes just a mustard seed of Faith to make monumental changes .. i think these small mira.. read more

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Added on February 14, 2022
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..