A Little Spittle Goes A Long Way

A Little Spittle Goes A Long Way

A Poem by Pete
"

Life is full of censorship. I can't spit in your eye. - Katharine Hepburn

"
trail-9-single-leaf-on-tree | Minnesota Prairie Roots

gravity on your side
it's easy to spit at the top
not so at the bottom
more side to side
more likely in your eye
like a denuded, colorless leaf in autumn



© 2022 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"Spit in the sky, it falls in your eye" - Jamaican Proverb


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lol it's the first time I will accept the "spitting" thing :> people find it difficult to put themselves in others shoes. easy for them to act only from where they are. ego and arrogance will always be the first problem in humans' nature, some hurtful words go straight to the heart, easy to do, easy to hurt one another because it is not us. still at the same time what I can see here from another perspective is, do all You can to reach the sky then You are allowed to do whatever You want :>

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Years Ago

you always seem to know how to reach the higher ground or at least aspire to do so. i'm beginning t.. read more
lightsong

3 Years Ago

I always believe in the heart and soul, so dear Pete even if You were the Top of Kings my believe th.. read more



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lol it's the first time I will accept the "spitting" thing :> people find it difficult to put themselves in others shoes. easy for them to act only from where they are. ego and arrogance will always be the first problem in humans' nature, some hurtful words go straight to the heart, easy to do, easy to hurt one another because it is not us. still at the same time what I can see here from another perspective is, do all You can to reach the sky then You are allowed to do whatever You want :>

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Years Ago

you always seem to know how to reach the higher ground or at least aspire to do so. i'm beginning t.. read more
lightsong

3 Years Ago

I always believe in the heart and soul, so dear Pete even if You were the Top of Kings my believe th.. read more
There are some angry spots which can be vicious especially coming from a female.
I'll take the spot and shine of shoes. She might toss that too and that is a big insult in the Arab culture. An excellent poem with refraining message.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Years Ago

probably one of the few things I can still do as well if not better than when I was a kid. thank yo.. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

All understood. You are welcome sir Pete....................

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..