A Knowing Way

A Knowing Way

A Poem by Pete
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He who hears the rippling of rivers in these degenerate days will not utterly despair. - Thoreau

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Spring stream on Summer Hill

at the clouded pinnacle of a grey day
the world swollen and heavy
i descend the steep bank by the edge of a winding, country road
the carpeting mulch of decaying leaves and dampness softening my desperate, lumbering steps
ducking under innocent branches
treading on crisp, erstwhile sticks of yesteryear
variously delayed by stern, prickly vines

i scan left to right and back again for a path of least resistance
not quite sure where i'm headed
i hear the liquid drone of an obscure river off in the distance
not fully comprehending why, i yearn to be in unconscious proximity
close enough to crouch down and run thirsting fingers through flowing waters
near enough to read the tea leaves of fluvial reflections at the surface

a cordial breeze beckons softly through the barren, late-autumnal woods
whispering repeatedly
this way
come if you will
this way
i am here
draw near
lay your burdens down
with little left to say
heart pounding and moral compass gone astray
i arrive with

a knowing way

© 2022 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
“The life in us is like the water in the river. It may rise this year higher than man has ever known it, and flood the parched uplands; even this may be the eventful year, which will drown out all our muskrats. It was not always dry land where we dwell.” - Thoreau

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I think the Thoreau quote gives a clue to the meaning of this one. The nature imagery that comprises the first part of the poem serves as a relief from the dispiriting news we seem to be getting from many places these days. It's certainly better company than the morning news.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Years Ago

can't put anything past you. thanks j. the b. ... :)



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A marvelous poem sir Pete with good imagery. Lots of things can burden us in life; we need relief and a release. We head to our favorite spots. We find peace, solace and serenity. We are refreshed, hesitant to go back to a cruel world.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Years Ago

spot on observations dear poet. i am drawn to such places like a magnet (a true reminder and refuge.. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow! A good calling. You are welcome sir Pete.
I believe Thoreau would be most proud of this one, himself. It reads as your best for me, and divulges the caliber of talent I've come to know is there!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Years Ago

wow! i am honored dear poet and friend. keep well and keep listening to music. thank you ... :)
I think the Thoreau quote gives a clue to the meaning of this one. The nature imagery that comprises the first part of the poem serves as a relief from the dispiriting news we seem to be getting from many places these days. It's certainly better company than the morning news.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Years Ago

can't put anything past you. thanks j. the b. ... :)

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Added on November 30, 2022
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..