Titanic

as an enterprising, disrobing tide rolls in

twirling

dancing

joyously and boldly prancing

memories of your touch curtsey and bow

as tender lips declare and taut hugs avow

raising more than an innocent eyebrow

no need to ask how

introducing majestic hills to the sky

both desire and fate nimble and spry

eternity will never die

no need to ask why

hearts aflutter and passion manic

no silent fear or utter panic

calmly setting sail with two tickets

traversing the deep, robust sea of atlas' atlantic

aboard the newly christened, myopic titanic

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

I absolutely love your analogy to the movie, Pete! The fascination of this tragedy will never die. Thank you for such a riveting read. Celine's voice is magic. You know I just had to listen!

[Pete]

like true love, that story never gets old and will never die. celine is the icing on the cake ... :)

[John the Baptist]

Have never seen the Titanic used as a metaphor for a relationship. I guess the lesson is that when you feel ongoing coolness from the other, the icebergs can't be far behind.

[Pete]

brrr, suddenly it got awfully cold in here ... :)