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20/15

A Poem by Pete

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baptized
synchronized
surprised
better than average vision in wanting eyes

in a travesty of chance
hands and hearts entwined
conceiving love and birthing romance

all it took was one glance



© 2023 Pete


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Sometimes the “eyes” have it, that’s all it takes, and that’s what happened in this piece….a glance and more and suddenly it’s romance…..nice work Pete, I enjoyed it.
Best, B

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Years Ago

thanks betty. as they say, "the eyes are the windows to the soul" ... :)
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Yes they are Pete... and you're very welcome!
Best, B

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..