Escapement

moving in fluent rhythms

with a heart of refrain

eyes of melody

strands of hair like resonating guitar strings

moods of percussion

depth of bass

intricate chords

ivory passions tickled like piano keys

her lips the chorus

she was music

her mere touch a song

how could such a love as this be wrong

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Yes, how could it be wrong.. the way you portray her in terms of the art and touch of music, everything about her was a complete symphony...what more does one want? love each instrument and how it feels so sensual...romantic..."ivory passions tickle like piano keys"... what a great line! "Here mere touch a song"...
Love it Pete!
Warmly, B

[Pete]

lol - i guess those who don't have it write about it. thanks for the great share as always b.

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome, always
Warmly, B

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. I enjoyed this.

[Pete]

thanks for the read twc.