Grand Indecency

Fire is the most tolerable third party. - Thoreau

dogs in heat

souls comingled in sweat of night

tongues dancing a twisting tango

fingers of ecstasy tracing body's wanting, pounding flesh

up, down, sideways and every which way

as want never ends with ever more moans to say

time no longer a dimension

synchronized breaths pant and boogey

rubbing blurred lines of flesh's fantasy

as footnotes in essence's passage of surrender

stacking pleasure like cordwood of desire

in a forever locked diary of pure, animalistic fire

Author's Note

"There is no remedy for love but to love more." - Thoreau

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

this writing is raw and full of passion. you describe the dance of two bodies in primal and almost grotesque way, as if the hunger for each other is insatiable. fierce writing full of vivid imagery.

[Pete]

all true. thanks for sharing em.