Minimal Subliminal

Minimal Subliminal

A Poem by Pete
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The sun is alone, except in thick weather, when there sometimes appear to be two, but one is a mock sun. - Thoreau

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Winter is here! The days only get ...

january sun
rubs tenuous sticks jointly
praying for a spark



© 2025 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"The warmth comes directly from the sun, and is not radiated from the earth, as in summer; and when we feel his beams on our backs as we are treading some snowy dell, we are grateful as for a special kindness, and bless the sun which has followed us into that by-place." - Thoreau

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It’s day three winter here is it summer there now.
Loved it 😊

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

7 Months Ago

oh that's right - you folks are seasonally opposite us. thanks julie, hope all is good with you.
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

7 Months Ago

Yes thanks Is that your pic Canada ?
Pete

7 Months Ago

not mine but gorgeous isn''t it?
I, for one, am glad it's Spring. Just reading this made me cold. Good write.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

7 Months Ago

it was a long winter and i too am glad that it's spring. you won't be cold for very long. weather .. read more
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Posted 7 Months Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..