How Sweet It Is

How sweet is the perception of a new natural fact! - Thoreau

under a lemonade sun

beneath a licorice parasol

i want to wander through candy corn fields

basking in a confection of sugary innocence

tasting cloying glory

a place where all fingers shine with diamond rings

as untold elation takes center stage and sings

whilst heaven's angels dance our strings

Author's Note

“What is sour in the house a bracing walk in the woods makes sweet.” - Thoreau

Reviews

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oh how sweet... the words are in harmony. it felt like every sentence was holding hands and dancing. professionally written sir, I loved it

[Betty Hermelee]

Pete. First, I really Liked the song you chose....it was definitely "happy " one; and you words match perfectly...I could see his as a dream too...it shows us that there is some glory in this tough world we live in.."basking in a confection of innocence"....love that line....thanks for sharing!




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[Poetic Beauty]

I do hope heaven has childish wonder to it. This sounds like an amazing interpretation of it

[Pete]

we can only hope and believe.

[Poetic Beauty]

Yes we can and do

[Poetic Beauty]

Yes we can and do

[Amanda Renee]

Imagery and storytelling in its finest!

[Pete]

thanks for the kind share.

[K. Louis]

How dreamy. I especially liked the two opening lines.

[Pete]

thank you for saying so.