Seventeen With No Half In Between

Seventeen With No Half In Between

A Poem by Pete
"

Age is no better, hardly so well, qualified for an instructor as youth, for it has not profited so much as it has lost. - Thoreau

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Colorful Music Notes Flying Out Of The ...

rockin', bumpy road
duct taped windows rolled clear down
happy eternal



© 2025 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"The youth gets together his materials to build a bridge to the moon, or, perchance, a palace or temple on the earth, and, at length, the middle-aged man concludes to build a woodshed with them." -Thoreau

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You know what I find so fascinating about pieces like this? Its able to speak to a youth that maybe not everyone had, but yet, makes it feel like they did. It makes the experience feel universal despite personal circumstances. Perhaps the bumpy road and duct taped windows are not necessarily literal, but can be akin to personal awakenings or changes in pathways. Its real, its raw, its personal, without having to be legitimately about this exact moment. I appreciate pieces like this, they feel warm and real. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 6 Months Ago


who cares what the vehicle looks like as long as it can get us to love...duct tape is pretty strong...so are emotions...nice senryu...metaphorically speaking.
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

6 Months Ago

indeed. more weight to how we feel than how we/things look.

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Added on June 20, 2025
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..