"The sea-shore is a sort of neutral ground, a most advantageous point from which to contemplate this world. It is even a trivial place. The waves forever rolling to the land are too far-travelled and untamable to be familiar. Creeping along the endless beach amid the sun-squall and the foam, it occurs to us that we, too, are the product of sea-slime." - Thoreau
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Hi Pete, the video is my favorite portion, add it to "spit in the ocean
no need for a commotion
wear it like lotion"... I Wish You Were Here...What a combination!
(did you check out that multi-colored strobe light by the drums! ;-)
Posted 6 Months Ago
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6 Months Ago
appreciate your thoughts on all eternity. thanks for sharing and agreed - great song and performanc.. read moreappreciate your thoughts on all eternity. thanks for sharing and agreed - great song and performance..
Short, sharp, and strangely serene. This poem feels like a shrug to the chaos: Spit, soothe, stroll. I love how it echoes Thoreau’s beach-walking wisdom with a modern twist.
Posted 6 Months Ago
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6 Months Ago
thank you for sharing rich thoughts. you gleamed much from few words. i can see that you "get it".
6 Months Ago
Thank you, Pete. It was a pleasure to read and reflect on your work. I’m glad my thoughts resonate.. read moreThank you, Pete. It was a pleasure to read and reflect on your work. I’m glad my thoughts resonated with what you intended.
I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..