Breaking Point

Breaking Point

A Poem by Pete
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"If this world were all man, I could not stretch myself, I should lose all hope. He is constraint, she is freedom to me. He makes me wish for another world." - Thoreau

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Stretching a Rubber Band Elastic To its ...

stretched beyond reason
a rubber band mind goes snap
sanity's treason



© 2025 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"There is considerable danger that a man will be crazy between dinner and supper; but it will not directly answer any good purposethat I know of, and it is just as easy to be sane. In sane moments we regard only the facts, the case that is." - Thoreau

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Dear Pete
I like this one! Your metaphor rubber band is a perfect photo to show a breakdown … of any of us at any time… in this crazy world it’s a struggle to stay sane… I think one’s life has to be in a balance to avoid a breakdown… or some tragic event must happen… in any case, you certainly show us what can happen when we snap my friend
Warmly
B🌷🌷🌷🌷

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Months Ago

lol. in this world, it's a wonder we're not all wearing straight jackets or maybe we are and just d.. read more



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Hi Pete. I love to read your Thoreau, it gives me a more clear idea of where your head is.
In sane moments we regard only the facts. (Think about that.)
Facts as we know them.
Seems Challenger was launched on facts.
As we knew them.
YES! That Breaking Point!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Months Ago

everyone's got one. seems are getting ever harder to stay sane in this ever worsening, crazy world... read more
Ms claws

5 Months Ago

Darling Pete, Please remember to NOT worry about things you cannot control. All your stress won't an.. read more
Ms claws

5 Months Ago

Oh, yeah, I loved the video. Didn't the drummer with the blue bandana look like Eddie Murphy?
Dear Pete
I like this one! Your metaphor rubber band is a perfect photo to show a breakdown … of any of us at any time… in this crazy world it’s a struggle to stay sane… I think one’s life has to be in a balance to avoid a breakdown… or some tragic event must happen… in any case, you certainly show us what can happen when we snap my friend
Warmly
B🌷🌷🌷🌷

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Months Ago

lol. in this world, it's a wonder we're not all wearing straight jackets or maybe we are and just d.. read more
It's like how delhi is affected with pollution and if you still air becomes poison...
Thank you

Jessy Jacob

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Months Ago

thank you for sharing kind thoughts.

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..