Too Much of A Good Thing Is Surely Never Enough

Too Much of A Good Thing Is Surely Never Enough

A Poem by Pete
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There is no remedy for love but to love more. - Thoreau

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Free Sunset Freedom Pose Image ...

straight from the heart and even better off the cuff
what is this thing
what is this stuff
falling like snow and sprinkled like dandruff
smooth tasting and satisfying like a cream puff
i don't like it when it tries to play rough
thrust into the sharp horns of billy goats gruff
filling like peanut butter and sweet like fluff
i may not know much
but i concede
hurry, get off your sweet duff
too much of a good thing is surely never enough



© 2025 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"The cost of a thing is the amount of what I will call life which is required to be exchanged for it, immediately or in the long run." - Thoreau

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Fantastic work, my friend.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Months Ago

thank you twc.

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..