Blue on Black

Blue on Black

A Poem by Pete
"

... a tempered blue as of the sky and dark water commingled. - Thoreau

"
Blue Smoke On Black Background by Luvo

got up very early this morning
'twas still dark
but not everything was out of sight
turns out someone had forgotten to put out their lit cigarette from last night

smoldering smoke rode the sky bareback
brushing strokes from an innate, bruised palette of blue on black
its alibi airtight
what's right is right
so much for flying a kite



© 2025 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"As the skies appear to a man, so is his mind. Some see only clouds there; some, prodigies and portents; some rarely look up at all; their heads, like the brutes,' are directed toward Earth. Some behold there serenity, purity, beauty ineffable. The world runs to see the panorama, when there is a panorama in the sky which few go to see." - Thoreau

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Tremendous work. Powerful writing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Pete

2 Months Ago

thanks twc.

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Added on October 19, 2025
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..