Unclogging Pipe Dreams

Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake. - Thoreau

steel eyelids heavy from chewing cud

darkness shines its spotlight

silence screams

reality sleeps

daytime gathers wool

if only in dreams

as one slipper and one shoe fall with a thud

Author's Note

"Hold fast to your most indefinite, waking dream." - Thoreau

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

some of my most vivid dreams are when steel eyelids force my surrender ... and in between sleep and waking ... i don't know Pete ... over all ... seems a mess ;) ... but vivid most assured
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[Pete]

thanks for the share brother. i think my muse said it best, "Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake."

[Einstein Noodle]

yes ... so true and well put