You Can't Even Tell

You Can't Even Tell

A Poem by Pete
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We have the St. Vitus' dance, and cannot possibly keep our heads still. - Thoreau

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Eiffel Tower | National Geographic Kids

taller than the eiffel tower in france
making you dance
putting you in a trance
coercing you into taking a chance

hypnotized
mesmerized
baptized
synthesized
stylized and exorcised
agonized and authorized
surprised and revised

oh well
two bass notes and a cow bell
it's quite swell
disguised so well that you can't even tell
as you cut a rug in hell



© 2026 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"When I hear music, I fear no danger. I am invulnerable." - Thoreau

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Added on January 1, 2026
Last Updated on January 2, 2026

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..