Don't Bother Me

Don't Bother Me

A Poem by Pete
"

Rescue the drowning and tie your shoestrings. - Thoreau

"
Elderly man walking alone on a rainy ...

don't bother me
i'm walking in the rain
trying to find what's left of my brain
it's wet
it's cold
so do as you're told
i'm out of breath
soaked to the bone
breaking out of this nursing home

don't bother me
i'm running away from getting old
running away from the mold
running away from always being told
trying to get back to my house that's been sold
i'm getting away from this prison sentence stay
getting away from all the hair that's bald, blue and gray
and empty, clanking bottles of hairspray

don't bother trying to talk to me
i have nothing to say
besides, all it will do is burn another precious day
i want to be young and free
so whatever you do, please don't bother me
i don't like jello
or sitting in diapers that make your eyes burn because they're wet and yellow
don't worry about fluffing my pillow like a marshmallow
just bend down and fasten my orthopedic sneakers 
if you would, please, my good fellow



© 2026 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"As if you could kill time without injuring eternity." - Thoreau

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This one hurts in a quiet, humiliating way—and that’s exactly why it works. There’s dark humor here, but it’s the kind that comes from fear, not cleverness. The repetition of “don’t bother me” feels like a shield against what’s coming, and the nursing home details land hard without begging for sympathy. That last polite line is brutal—dignity clinging on by a thread. This reads like someone still fighting while the walls are closing in. Strong, uncomfortable, and honest.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Days Ago

sounds like you gleaned it all. what a great review - couldn't have explained it better myself. th.. read more



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This one hurts in a quiet, humiliating way—and that’s exactly why it works. There’s dark humor here, but it’s the kind that comes from fear, not cleverness. The repetition of “don’t bother me” feels like a shield against what’s coming, and the nursing home details land hard without begging for sympathy. That last polite line is brutal—dignity clinging on by a thread. This reads like someone still fighting while the walls are closing in. Strong, uncomfortable, and honest.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Days Ago

sounds like you gleaned it all. what a great review - couldn't have explained it better myself. th.. read more

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Added on January 3, 2026
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..