Into The Void

Into The Void

A Poem by Pete

When You Feel An Empty Void. When you ...
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i hear the hollow, empty echo of your loneliness
the longing flute music from your cracked, chapped lips
your missing sun in a total eclipse
the sound of your faucet in need of tightening as it persistently drips
your, "thank you" drowned out only by your, "please"
i see the wet clothes on your clothesline with no breeze
the vast holes in your swiss cheese
when your very will is brought to its knees

i hear you wheezing despair
searching high and low for a reason to care
scarfing down potato chips from a wrinkled bag,
sitting alone on the couch in the dark, in your dirty underwear
the prayers you utter at midnight
when you're flying an invisible, windless kite
i feel the chasm in your pocket that once held jingling car keys
and the jiggled, locked doorhandle of your soul's homelessness



© 2026 Pete


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oh my goodness ... such despair and depression .. a terrible disease that the world seems to be magnifying ... could be a father, a mother, sibling ... friend or stranger .. the spiral downward and helpless, overwhelming feelings fuel .. so sad Pete .. I do hope this is not a confessional poem about someone you know ... luv on ya brother
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

seems like there's so much of it. maybe its the short days, long nights and coldness of winter.
Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

there is some science behind that for sure ... cabin fever does have roots



Reviews

oh my goodness ... such despair and depression .. a terrible disease that the world seems to be magnifying ... could be a father, a mother, sibling ... friend or stranger .. the spiral downward and helpless, overwhelming feelings fuel .. so sad Pete .. I do hope this is not a confessional poem about someone you know ... luv on ya brother
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

seems like there's so much of it. maybe its the short days, long nights and coldness of winter.
Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

there is some science behind that for sure ... cabin fever does have roots

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Added on January 7, 2026
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..