Not Beyond This Point

The sea-shore is a sort of neutral ground... The waves forever rolling to the land are too far-travelled and untamable to be familiar - Thoreau

with a wayward hand

ill-tempered waves b***h-slap rocks

deeply insulted

Author's Note

"Creeping along the endless beach amid the sun-squall and the foam, it occurs to us that we, too, are the product of sea-slime." - Thoreau

Reviews

[lizzie]

Hi! Your story has a very natural emotional flow, and it translates wonderfully into visual storytelling. Several moments felt perfect for comic panels.
I’m a professional comic/webtoon artist working on commission would love to chat if you’re interested.
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[Thomas W Case]

That’s sharp and effective—miniature violence with attitude. The anthropomorphism lands fast, and “deeply insulted” gives it a dry, comic aftershock.

[Pete]

had a feeling it would draw someone's attention. appreciate the shared thoughts twc.