In A World That Spins The Wrong Way

In A World That Spins The Wrong Way

A Poem by Pete
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We have the St. Vitus' dance, and cannot possibly keep our heads still.

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Art Analysis: Dance by Henri Matisse ...
The Dance, oil on canvas by Henri Matisse (1910)

basking in oblivion
embracing the future while joining hands with echoes of the past
reveling in each other's mere presence
swaying to our own inaudible, delicate anthem of love
twirling in our own catechism of eternity
sculpting miracles from clay
shaping tomorrow in a different way

we were alive
we were young and free
so we danced in our nakedness
that's all we knew
and that's all that mattered
regardless of what they say
in a world that spins the wrong way


© 2026 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." - Thoreau

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I like the way you created a column of verbs in the first stanza. Nice finish with the last line. I wonder how many readers know of the St. Vitus dance?

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

thank you. i appreciate the kind, astute words.

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..