Jail Or Holy Grail

Jail Or Holy Grail

A Poem by Pete
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The order of things should be reversed; the seventh day should be the day of toil...and the other six his Sabbath of the affections and the soul... - Thoreau

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Holy Grail ...

emancipation
free from spiritual jail
hoist that holy grail



© 2026 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"So we saunter toward the Holy Land, till one day the sun shall shine more brightly than ever he has done, shall perchance shine into our minds and hearts, and light up our whole lives with a great awakening light..." - Thoreau

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What a beautiful poem! Your writing style is truly captivating, and I think it would translate wonderfully into a comic. I have a few ideas that could make it even more engaging, and I’d love to discuss them with you either on Discord or via email at sakuravibes01@gmail.com @sakura_vibes01.

I’m a paid artist. Please note that I only communicate with people who are 18 years or older.

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Added on February 16, 2026
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..