Jailbreak

Jailbreak

A Poem by Pete
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In an unjust society the only place for a just man is prison. - Thoreau

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10,400+ Breaking Out Of Prison Stock ...

come daybreak
it's an earthquake 
it's a file baked into a cake
it's payback with a backache
it's freedom at stake

real and not fake
hardly a clambake
it's yours to take
for heaven's sake
it's a jailbreak



© 2026 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"Why the jailer does not leave open his prison doors, - why the judge does not dismiss his case, - why the preacher does not dismiss his congregation! It is because they do not obey the hint God gives them, nor accept the pardon which he freely offers to all." - Thoreau

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It’s a file baked into a cake. Yep, you wouldn’t take being locked up easy. Anything to get to get out. Saw this playing out like a movie Pete. Hope all is good in your world.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Month Ago

lol. thanks chris. good to "see" you. has been a cold, snowy winter here, twice over a foot of sn.. read more
Punchy, raw rhythm—like life itself smacking you awake.
Every line hits, bruised but unbowed, carrying teeth and laughter.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Month Ago

wow. even your reviews are poetry. thanks twc. keep well.

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Added on March 5, 2026
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..