Met Someone

A Poem by The Jive

The very end I'd been dreading

had come to pass

revealed as though he were reading aloud my nightmare

as though I had WILLED it into reality

Some wanton fate smelled blood in the water

© 2012 The Jive

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JadeForever

very emotional..:D i like the title but maybe instead of WILLED you could make willed italicized..:) Bravo!

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

timmmmmmsardga

I like it! It involves a lot of thought.

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harmonica winds

deep and intriguing, : )

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on June 9, 2012
Last Updated on June 9, 2012

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The Jive

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I haven't written poetry since classes in college, which has been a few years. When I look back at that stuff I feel it is laughably bad, so I'm a bit self conscious. I've been inspired lately (mostly.. more..