It used to be said that they'd steal anything not nailed down, but nature doesn't play by the rules when she us annoyed. 😃
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Posted 10 Months Ago
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10 Months Ago
Thanks. In this part of the world, tornados are a real threat. I'll try to follow your instructions.
A fun little poem, Sam, about a terrifying force. I remember such a thing in Waco, my home town, as you know. It was thought, for some reason I don't recall, that Waco was safe from tornadoes, but in 1954, when I was 7, a twister sashayed down main street and swept up two kids in the town swimming pool then moseyed off with them, leaving much destruction, shock, and terror behind. I still get the jitters when I hear one announced in some weather bulletin. Your little bitty ditty made me smile -- but it was a nervous smile. Thanks a lot. :)
This one made my breath quicken. A few years back, a tornado came through the Kawartha Lakes at 430 in the morning, and it was a terrifying experience. Your verse brought that all back. The devastation was unreal.
Posted 8 Months Ago
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8 Months Ago
Thank you. Twisters are occurring in places where they used to not go, unfortunately. It's global wa.. read moreThank you. Twisters are occurring in places where they used to not go, unfortunately. It's global warming, but you-know-who wants to ignore it.
8 Months Ago
That's the case here in Ontario. We had a few late last year, which is not normal for November.
Nice. Been in a hurricane of such force a twister would cower and the result was quite similar. The sheer power of nature is astounding. Much enjoyed 🙏🏻🕊️
Posted 9 Months Ago
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9 Months Ago
thank you. I'll pass on both of them.
9 Months Ago
As would I. The poem you wrote is what I much enjoyed though that may not have been clear in my firs.. read moreAs would I. The poem you wrote is what I much enjoyed though that may not have been clear in my first comment. 🕊️🙏🏻
And it has caused a grin or two from/by me! Your words are an example of 'never was a word said in jest - unless written by Mr Dickens!' Offered and laid in your usual grand style, sir.
I hope this is not true????? Our country is being pummeled by tornados. I hope you and your loved ones are ok. I know you live somewhere prone to tornados, too. Yikes! Aside from real life concern, I enjoyed your poem. It is a nice use of rhyme and meter, which I admire. I'm terrible at that. What was the group assignment/goal? I'm really happy to see new work from you!
Posted 10 Months Ago
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10 Months Ago
Thank you. The twisters have missed us so far and I hope it stays that way. I hope they steer clear .. read moreThank you. The twisters have missed us so far and I hope it stays that way. I hope they steer clear of you, too. It seems I can barely write anything anymore.
It used to be said that they'd steal anything not nailed down, but nature doesn't play by the rules when she us annoyed. 😃
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Posted 10 Months Ago
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10 Months Ago
Thanks. In this part of the world, tornados are a real threat. I'll try to follow your instructions.
Greetings, all. I'm a seventy-seven year-old father of three sons who enjoys writing, art, music, motorcycles, cooking, and a few other things. From 1967 to 1988, I served in the US Navy, where I trav.. more..