Why oh Why?

Why oh Why?

A Poem by Samuel Dickens
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It's the season!

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Here I lie beneath the sky

But why oh why oh why?

“Our roof is gone,” said my sister

“Taken by a Texas twister”

© 2025 Samuel Dickens


Author's Note

Samuel Dickens
I wrote this for Emma's group, but couldn't figure out how to post it there. It's not much, I know, but maybe will cause a grin or two.

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It used to be said that they'd steal anything not nailed down, but nature doesn't play by the rules when she us annoyed. 😃

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Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samuel Dickens

10 Months Ago

Thanks. In this part of the world, tornados are a real threat. I'll try to follow your instructions.



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A fun little poem, Sam, about a terrifying force. I remember such a thing in Waco, my home town, as you know. It was thought, for some reason I don't recall, that Waco was safe from tornadoes, but in 1954, when I was 7, a twister sashayed down main street and swept up two kids in the town swimming pool then moseyed off with them, leaving much destruction, shock, and terror behind. I still get the jitters when I hear one announced in some weather bulletin. Your little bitty ditty made me smile -- but it was a nervous smile. Thanks a lot. :)


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samuel Dickens

2 Months Ago

Thank you. Yeah, they're no fun.
I'm smiling. Having lived in Kansas for 4 years.

Randall...

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samuel Dickens

2 Months Ago

Thank you. I know we really don't like those things.
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MCS
This one made my breath quicken. A few years back, a tornado came through the Kawartha Lakes at 430 in the morning, and it was a terrifying experience. Your verse brought that all back. The devastation was unreal.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samuel Dickens

8 Months Ago

Thank you. Twisters are occurring in places where they used to not go, unfortunately. It's global wa.. read more
MCS

8 Months Ago

That's the case here in Ontario. We had a few late last year, which is not normal for November.
Nice. Been in a hurricane of such force a twister would cower and the result was quite similar. The sheer power of nature is astounding. Much enjoyed 🙏🏻🕊️

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samuel Dickens

9 Months Ago

thank you. I'll pass on both of them.
redd Brick Keshner

9 Months Ago

As would I. The poem you wrote is what I much enjoyed though that may not have been clear in my firs.. read more
And it has caused a grin or two from/by me! Your words are an example of 'never was a word said in jest - unless written by Mr Dickens!' Offered and laid in your usual grand style, sir.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samuel Dickens

10 Months Ago

Thank you.
I hope this is not true????? Our country is being pummeled by tornados. I hope you and your loved ones are ok. I know you live somewhere prone to tornados, too. Yikes! Aside from real life concern, I enjoyed your poem. It is a nice use of rhyme and meter, which I admire. I'm terrible at that. What was the group assignment/goal? I'm really happy to see new work from you!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samuel Dickens

10 Months Ago

Thank you. The twisters have missed us so far and I hope it stays that way. I hope they steer clear .. read more
It used to be said that they'd steal anything not nailed down, but nature doesn't play by the rules when she us annoyed. 😃

To post on the group pages...
Go to the group pages, then below the list of posted writes, click on the bit that says more. A list of all your writes will show in alphabetical order. Choose the one required to post then click submit.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samuel Dickens

10 Months Ago

Thanks. In this part of the world, tornados are a real threat. I'll try to follow your instructions.

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Samuel Dickens
Samuel Dickens

Alma, AR



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Greetings, all. I'm a seventy-seven year-old father of three sons who enjoys writing, art, music, motorcycles, cooking, and a few other things. From 1967 to 1988, I served in the US Navy, where I trav.. more..