Believe me

Why is it so hard?

You think that I deceive you
I only want to please you
Deny that I would hold you
Even though I told you
My heart is yours for taking
It breaks; you think im faking...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[child of God]

So little but yet so powerful I love the directness of it such raw emotions with so little words thank you for this read
100/100

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words. You said enough. Left the reader with the want to know more. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[shocker]

It's really good and the dramatic change feels right in place and seems just about right when it comes to a some love

[Jack Kennedy]

This is a short but effective and believe me a good poem that I feel is well written! Good job

[kitty cat]

thank i loved it and you can add me if you want