Hollywood Allure

Hollywood Allure

A Poem by Kayleen
"

Glamour is an illusion

"

Pretty town
Pretty run down
Should of seen it
If we looked around
But there was too much

Glitter
In our eyes
Dancing in the shadows 
Where the stars played
Make believing 
We could make it
If we stayed
In a 
Pretty town
Pretty run down
What a state of
Glorious
   Decay...

© 2015 Kayleen


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Kayleen
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Loved the flow, the rhyme and the message. Overall great write!

Posted 15 Years Ago
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Ben
Very good! Looks aren't everything, you know!

Posted 16 Years Ago
i like! all that glitters isnt always gold though... i have a short that is about a sudden trip i took out to LA.

Posted 16 Years Ago

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 Added on July 21, 2009
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Kayleen
Kayleen

Anaheim, CA



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Kayleen. 22. California. I Like Old School Punk Rock, Electro nonsense, and Katy Perry. The Mighty f*****g Boosh. Everything else amazing overseas we dont have here. I make movies, bad decisions.. more..