Low-down High

story of a kiss

 that boy's wild

sparked  fire in her hips

that girl's trouble

the whispers on their lips

high on the floor

its her first kiss

drunk under the table

he's in her grip

such a bad decision

his tongue slips

hot and wet

between her lips

chemically induced

its sloppy; too quick

he's a friend's

yet neither quit

Author's Note

comments please?

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It had great flow... I like that you injected some humor into it... as long as you speak from the heart with your words you can't go wrong and I can see you spoke with sincerity. I can see why it is not how you'd want your first kiss.