Betrayal

what they dont know cant hurt them... can it?

Im afraid of what will happen

after you come home

im not sure if I can handle

next time we are alone

I know that we werent sober

but it wasnt just the drinks

I know the way you look at me

I know the way you think

Im not sure who started it

which one of us gave first

Just your mouth entwined with mine

I thought my heart would burst

No time to feel guilty

enveloped in our sin

indulging something we both wanted

your fingers on my skin

But you know Im good at lying

we can always play pretend

act like nothing ever happened

we were never more then friends

and it would be so easy

if we could be together

but thats just a silly wish

I'll be wishing on forever...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Wynter Ignatius]

This is an interesting piece as my mind went to someone very close to my heart and soul - my kindred, my best friend yet she has her own life and I have mine. Should we get into close proximity with one another, all bets might be off, hence why it has not happened yet. Not that we lack control so much as we connect like no others; I've even been told I understand her and can calm her better than her boyfriend so there is that issue to keep me at a distance.

Wonderful piece that triggered an emotional and thought provoking response by me - be proud of this one.

[Quinn]

Really powerful poem here. Fantastically written

[Salem]

Amazing write well done and keep it up

[Petals & Pearls]

I love this one! The rhyming flows and the phrasing is perfect! Well done! :)

[JB Murray]

I'm sensing a certain biographical lineage to your last few poems...lol. Over all, this is a good solid write! Well versed, and well thought. Nice job!

[Crazy Cat Man]

man i love this piece and can relate to it especially the last stanza

and it would be so easy
if we could be together
but thats just a silly wish
I'll be wishing on forever...


yup i feel that way too with a lost love whom i felt betrayed by. Oh well thats life and we move on :)

[Annabelle Lee]

Very sweet poem, I could see nothing wrong with it and This is the kind of stuff I'd hope to see in a book soon. Nice write

A.L.

[Coyote Poetry]

Those uncontrolled dances in the emotion of love leave us wanting more. I like the good memories and hope for more. No weakness in the very good story in this poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[writingurl14]

wow i really enjoyed it. i like how we know what is happening even thougth you dont tell us everything. it is a really good poem i also enjoyed the ryhming that you intertwined in the poem

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I have been there and the guilt was killing me... I broke up with my lady but gave her a lame excuse... a very powerful write.