where?

Where

Where do I say.

Where do my thoughts come from?,

Dreams, stories, even other books.

In my mind they float,

Then they put themselves together

First letters,

Then words,

Then sentences and after that,

Stories.

Possibly not even stories,

If you listen and think you can reveal,

A message.

Maybe even a lesson.

Just listen and let the words come to you.

Soon enough they will appear,

As the things you may hear,

in your mind,

Just clearer.

Reviews

[Lorraine]

Honestly there's something off about the flow. Some of them don't sound smooth and some lines are way too vague to make sense. Even so, I like the concept of personifying ideas. You make them sound like unknown objects coming from nowhere and then taking over our minds. It's a nice thought.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Manda]

wow this was awesome! the flow was excellent and the rhyming too