first love

First Love

 

 

I couldn't believe it,

he had said the words,

and typed the words,

All I could do was sit there,

frozen,

like a statue in a snow storm,

my body grew numb,

what do I say?,

What do I do?,

Do I love him back?,

Is any of this true?

I could only think of one thing to do,

I walked.

I walked to him,

I stood in front of him,

I pulled him to me,

And I said,

"I love you too.''

Reviews

[Theresa]

A very sweet poem reminiscent of a first love. Finally seeing the words or hearing them and feeling as if you are frozen in time so many different emotions running through you. Nicely done I really enjoyed this.

[Halkhend]

i like this tht is so sweet but leaves you wondering 'does she love him back?' very good :)

[Haifa]

so nice !!

[Bette]

i like this its very sweet, well done

[Tina Kline]

I like it a lot. It was very touching and so very real.

[JenLyn]

Awwwwwww this is so cute and simple but nice. It really captures how a first love is. Great write. Keep it up! :)

[Ice QueenJen]

I loved this piece and my guy has said it many times over the net- even asked me to marry him 3 times now! Feelings are so strong sometimes and you have brought them out well!

[Jacqueline Lopez]

BEAUTIFUL AND PRICELESS! SHORT BUT HEART FELT!!!

[NoAirToBreatheXSuffocat..]

i love this, i hope it happens to me one day!

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is a great write, i like it